2015高考英语冲刺阶段-高分作文军火库

2015高考英语冲刺阶段-高分作文军火库

【作文怎么得高分】

1、 卷面：clean & clear 辉体字（大小一致，落在线

上，避免毛刺）

2、 内容：尽量简单+覆盖全面

（写你会写的内容，越简单越好）

注意：不会写的句子一定能找到简单的方法来表达！ 3、 分段：尽量分三段，每段一个大要点

（每段只说一件事儿）！ （1）每段写成“总-分”结构； （2）每个拓展句前用过渡词引导； 4、过渡词：最好每句都有！ 【九种最基本段落结构】

(1) 主题句. For one thing, + 拓展句1. For another, 拓展句2.

(2) 主题句. On the one hand, + 拓展句1. On the other hand, 拓展句2.

(3) 主题句. First and foremost,拓展句1. Additionally, 拓展句2. Last but not least, 拓展句3.

(4) 主题句. To begin with,拓展句1. Besides,拓展句2. What’s more, 拓展句3. Finally, 拓展句4.

(5)【描述经历】Take one of my own experiences for example. Last month,… Then,… After that,… Unfortunately/Fortunately,… However,… Immediately,.. Finally,… The next day,… Early in the morning,… Late in the afternoon,… Two hours later,… (6)【解释观点】From my perspective, 我的观点. As for the reasons, first and foremost, 理由一. Additionally, 理由二. Last but not least, 理由三.

(7)【描述原因】There are three main reasons for this. First and foremost, 原因一. Additionally, 原因二.

Last but not least, 原因三. (8)【建议措施】

Here are some suggestions (for you). First and foremost, 建议一. Additionally, 建议二. Last but not least, 建议三.

【建议措施升级版】

实际且有效的措施必须立刻实行以改善当前状况。… Practical and effective measures must be put into practice immediately to improve the current situation. First and foremost, 建议一. Additionally, 建议二. Last but not least, 建议三. (9)【万能结尾句】

我希望 Hopefully, sb would do sth.

我相信I have the confidence that sb will do sth.

感谢你Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.

请回信I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

只有才Only in this way/by doing so can you have the chance of achieving your dreams/living a better life. 难避免 With these suggestions carried out, a much brighter future will be not only possible but also inevitable(不可避免). 伴随着这些建议被实行，一个更加光明的未来将不但是可能的而且是不可避免的。

Eg：There are many ways to master English. First and foremost, you are supposed to read some English newspapers. Additionally, it will be wise of you to watch some English movies. Last but not least, why not talk with native speakers? 5、遣词造句：

换词大法（把常用黯然低分词，换成巨牛闪光高分词）

should  sb had better do sth 建议 sb ought to do sth

sb be supposed to do sth Why not do sth?

It will be wise of you to do sth.

做某事的话你将是很聪明的

It will be beneficial for you to do sth.

对你来说做某事有益。

【虚拟】If I were you, I would do sth. 如果我是你的话，我就会做某事。

【虚拟】It is high time that you did sth. 真的到了你该做某事的时间了。

like  sb + be fond of + sth/doing sth 喜欢 sb + be crazy about + sth/doing sth 酷爱

sb + have fallen in love with + sth/doing sth 爱上 I have a lot of hobbies. First and foremost, I am fond of swimming, in that I like water. Additionally, I am crazy about reading, which is not only meaningful but also entertaining. Last but not least, I have fallen in love with guitar for many years.

think  I harbor the idea that….

我怀有这个观点，那就是…

 I take the attitude that….

我持有这个态度，那就是…

believe  I have the confidence that…

我有信心，那就是…

I hope…  Hopefully, sb would do sth.

Sb remember sth.  Sb keep in mind sth.

want  sb + would like + to do sth. 想要做某事 sb + desire to do sth 渴望做某事

sb+ have a great desire to do sth 非常渴望 sb+ plan to do sth.计划做某事

I want to do a lot of things in my university. First and foremost, I would like to travel around China during my summer and winter vacations, which will be not only meaningful but also entertaining. Additionally, I have a great desire to learn to swim, in that I like water. Last but not least, I plan to do some part time jobs, so that I can improve my interpersonal skills.

learn  pick up 偶然学到、顺便学到 master 掌握

important  essential 必要的

significant 至关重要的 vital 至关重要的 常见结构：

It is essential/significant/vital for sb to do sth. Doing sth is essential/significant/vital for sb. I take the attitude that there are many important things in our life. First and foremost, it is essential for us to love our family, in that it is the source of love. Additionally, reading book is significant for us, which is not only

meaningful but also entertaining. Last but not least, it is

vital for us to keep healthy.

difficult  challenging 有挑战性的

very  extremely 极端地

surprisingly 令人惊讶地

good  excellent 优秀的 + 人/书/电视节目 outstanding 出色的 + 人/书/电视节目 meaningful 有意义的 + 一件事

educational 有教育意义的 + 一件事 unforgettable 难忘的 + 一件事/人 beneficial 有益的+事/物

bad  terrible + 人/事/物 tiring 令人疲惫的 annoying 令人烦恼的 boring 令人无聊的

【投诉旅行社】

假设你是李华，参加了某某一日游（one day tour）活动，发现导游的介绍很无聊，带你去很多商店购物，而且交通很糟糕，请写信表达你的不满。

Yesterday, I took a one day tour, which was terrible. First and foremost, the tour guide’s introduction was boring. It is obvious that he knew little about the place of interest. Additionally, he took us to a lot of shops, which was annoying. Last but not least, the bus was surprisingly old, making me feel tired.

【把形容词换成“of+名词”结构】 difficult  of great difficulty有难度 different  of great difference有区别 beautiful  of great beauty有美感 useful  of great use有用处 helpful  of great help 有帮助 harmful  of great harm 有危害

【例】 作表语：

This book is useful.

This book is (of great use). 作定语：

This is a useful book.

This is a book (of great use).

高考英语必背超级范文（话题作文）

【特点】给出一个事件，让你发表观点，并陈述理由。 命题趋势：一般会夹叙夹议！ 议论：讲原因、给建议 记叙：讲经历、讲故事

（我是谁。某事变糟糕。某人谈话。变好） 【套路】

第一段：道理+原因 第二段：经历

第三段：总结+展望

【话题作文1】

请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇

短文，谈谈微笑的作用。

The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.

注意：①无须写标题；② 内容只需涉及一个方面；③词数为150左右。

【必背范文】

No one can deny a smile can help us through difficult situations. The reason is simple: it is your feeling that generates your expression, and similarly, it is your expression that influences your feeling.

Take one of my own experiences for example. As a top student in my school, I never fail to get a high score in any examination. Unfortunately, last week, I failed in an important math exam (due to a horrible cold), making me sad, discouraged, upset and desperate. However, my headmaster had a conversation with me, telling me to keep a smile. Immediately, I became happy, confident and brave again, making a decision that I will do better next time. From this experience, I learned that, more often than not, it is a smile that helps us overcome any challenges. Hopefully, everyone can master this powerful weapon to live a better life.

没有人能否认微笑能帮助我们通过困难的处境。理由很简单：正是你的感觉引发了你的表情，同样的，正是你的表情影响了你的感觉。

举一个我自己的经历作为例子。作为我们学校的一个尖子生，我从来没有失败去得到高分在任何的考试中。不幸的是，上一周，我失败了在一个重大的数学考试中由于一个可

怕的感冒，使得我伤心，沮丧，失落，绝望。然而，我的校长有一个交谈和我，告诉我去保持微笑。立刻，我变得快乐、自信和勇敢再一次，做出决定我会做得更好下一次。

从这个经历中，我学到，经常，正是一个微笑帮助我们克服了任何挑战。希望，每个人能掌握这种有力的武器去生活得更好。

【话题作文2】

Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数为100左右。

【必背范文】

No one can deny teamwork can help us get through difficult situations. The reason is simple: it is teamwork that generates strength.

Take one of my own experiences for example. Last week, an English play competition was held in our school and our class took part in it. Unfortunately, as Tom speaks English better than some other classmates, he failed to work together with us. However, as the vice monitor, I had a conversation with him, telling him to be modest and cooperate with us. Immediately, he changed, helping our class win the first prize.

From this experience, I learned that, more often than not, it is teamwork that helps us overcome any challenge. Hopefully, everyone can master this powerful weapon to live a better life.

没有人能否认团队工作能帮助我们通过困难的处境。理由很简单，正是团队工作的力量产生了力量当追狮子的时候。

举一个我自己的经历作为例子。上周，一个英语话剧比赛被举行在我们学校并且我们班参加了它。不幸的是，由于Tom说英语更好比其他同学，他没能跟我们一起合作。然而，作为副班长，我有了一次谈话跟他，告诉他去谦虚并且跟我们合作。立刻，他改变了，帮助我们班赢得了第一名。

从这个经历之中，我学到，经常，正是团队工作帮助我们克服了任何挑战。希望，每个人能掌握这个有力的武器去生活得更好。

【话题作文3】

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

You cannot choose (what you are given), but you can choose how you make use of it.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； ④词数为120左右。

【必背范文】

No one can deny we are supposed to make good use of what we are given. The reason is simple, it is what we have that makes us who we are.

Take one of my own experiences for example. As a top student in my school, I am crazy about books; as a result, my friends, relatives and teachers have given me a lot of books as gifts. However, so many books do I own that, one day, I decided to throw them away to make room for new ones. Fortunately, my dad had a conversation with me, telling me to reread those

books. So, I read all those books again within a week, gaining a lot of useful knowledge, feeling very excited.

From this experience, I learnt that, more often than not, it is what we have that can bring us a lot of happiness. Hopefully, everyone can master this powerful wisdom to live a better life.

没有人能否认我们应该利用好我们被给予的。原因很简单，正是我们拥有的让我们成为了我们是谁。

举一个我自己的经历作为例子。作为一个尖子生在我们学生，我酷爱书籍。因此，我的朋友、亲戚和老师已经给了我大量的书作为礼物。然而，我拥有如此多的书，以至于，一天，我决定仍它们出去，给新书腾地方。幸运的是，我的爸爸有了一个谈话和我，告诉我去重读那些书籍。所以，我读了全部的书再一次在一周之内，得到了很多有用的知识，感觉非常兴奋。

从这个经历中，我学到，经常，正是我们所拥有的，带给我们很多快乐。希望，每个人能掌握这种有力的智慧，去生活得更好。