求助喜欢挑战难度的翻译高手：一句咒语的翻译
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原句英文根本不押韵
这个咒语spell写的很简单，
不仅发音、连词性都不统一。
你可以这样翻译：
影子影子，听我号令，
张开眼睛，传我之音，
开动脑筋，行我使命。
如果要直译，估计比较难
补充：
传我之音，对应speak
开动脑筋，对应think
原文的意思是：影子开口说话，具有感知，拥有思维，最后是镜影成形（镜像成真）
贴上一片George RR Martin在a song of ice and fire中的歌谣，以及它的中文翻译。很押韵的说，虽然文章也很简单。
The Bear and the Maiden Fair
A bear there was, a bear, a bear!
All black and brown, and covered with hair!
The bear! The bear!
Oh, come, they said, oh come to the fair!
The fair? Said he, but I'm a bear!
All black, and brown, and covered with hair!
And Down the road from here to there.
From here! To There!
Three boys, a goat, and a dancing bear!
[He] danced and spun, all the way to the Fair!
The Fair! The Fair!
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Oh, sweet she was, and pure, and fair!
The maid with honey in her hair!
Her hair! Her hair!
The maid with honey in her hair!
[The bear,] smelled the scent on the summer air.
The bear! The bear!
All black and brown and covered with hair.
He smelled the scent on the summer air!
He sniffed and roared and smelled it there!
Honey on the summer air!
Oh, I'm a maid, and I'm pure and fair!
I'll never dance with a hairy bear!
A bear! A bear!
I'll never dance with a hairy bear!
He lifted her high into the air!
The bear! The bear!
I called for a knight, but you're a bear!
A bear! A bear!
All black and brown and covered with hair!
She kicked and wailed, the maid so fair,
But he licked the honey from her hair,
Her hair! Her hair!
Then she sighed and squealed and kicked the air!
My bear! She sang. My bear so fair!
And off they went, from here to there,
The bear, the bear, and the maiden fair.
这只狗熊，狗熊，狗熊！全身黑棕，罩着毛绒……噢，人们都在说，快来见美人！美人？他懂，可我是狗熊！全身黑棕，罩着毛绒！沿着大路这头到那弄。这头！那弄！男孩，山羊，跳舞的熊！边跳边转，慢慢走向美人！美人！美人！噢，她好甜，纯洁，美容！蜂蜜在少女发丛！跟随夏日里的气涌。狗熊！狗熊！全身黑棕，罩着毛绒。笑着喊香味在这弄！蜂蜜在空中！噢，我是女孩，纯洁而美容！跳舞不跟毛狗熊！狗熊！狗熊！跳舞不跟毛狗熊……把她举在空中！狗熊！狗熊！我呼唤骑士，可你是狗熊！狗熊！狗熊！全身黑棕，罩着毛绒！边踢边喊，少女惊恐，可他*蜂蜜的发丛，发丛！发丛！他*蜂蜜的发丛！叹息尖叫然后踢向空中！狗熊！她唱，美丽狗熊！我们一同，海角天空，狗熊，狗熊，少女美容。
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Surface 是表面 外表的意思
我的翻译
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陈述表面，感受表面，认为表面，*浮出水面
